| This is a horse who has been abused. As you can see, this horse looks very sad. |
| This is another animal who has also been abused. This dog has many cuts on him and looks very skinny. |
| This is a horse who has been abused. As you can see, this horse looks very sad. |
| This is another animal who has also been abused. This dog has many cuts on him and looks very skinny. |
I like how you describe what animal abuse is. The examples helped to understand what it is, too. I think you could used more varied sentences and put more examples. That would make it better.
ReplyDeleteIt's scary to think that dog fighting was a sport and people enjoyed it. You had a lot of good information and the pictures are really sad
ReplyDeleteGood job so far I really like your pictures and all of your facts that you added into your writing. I also liked how you described what animal abuse was and the detail you added into it.
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You described this topic really well and you chose good pictures to prove how horrible the abuse is. You should have explained your pictures more.
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